Feedback Analysis

Generally from the feedback they liked my story. They thought it was a good idea yet simple to understand. Also another aspect that contributed to the understanding was the cuts. Y se of digital technologies was said to be good, with the camera angles however more shot types could be used. My post production was complimented as well as my choice of music. And finally the ending was effective because they liked that you was left wondering.
From this exercise I am going to look into more use of dialogue. Although my music was said to be relevant when I do my thriller I am going to make sure the volume of it doesn’t interrupt with the dialogue like it did in this exercise. As well as that when it comes to filming it ia m going to make sure that I use more shot types I feel this will be essential to help the audience get more into my opening. An idea I may use for my thriller opening is a cliff hanger his seemed to work well in this case.
In conclusion I feel that doing this exercise was useful. Because I haven’t done media before it gave me an introduction into the process of making a production. I have learnt a lot from what I done right and also the mistakes I made. As well getting a group together and discussing the feedback made it evident the aspects that needed to be improved on. This was helpful for me to make my thriller better than this.